
If you have never been on a roller coaster before then you dont know the great feeling its like you are flying through the air. You hear the air whizzing past your ear like whispering a secret message while blowing by your ear. But another sound is the screams and yells of enjoyment its like in sypmphony. The yells are together like in a band. Its like the high yells together then the low screams together. Also the grinding wheels against the rail tracks and screaching to a halt at the end. Amazingly going at that speed I still managed to smell all the wonders down below. I could smell the intense smell of hotdogs frying and burgers sizzeling when they are turned over on the grill. But the strongest smell of all is the smell of popcorn popping and people eating it on the ground. While on the roller coaster you should not smell the tempting smells of the food on the ground. Ill tell you That was the best ever smells of food combined in one. And ill tell you why not to smell the food because the first thing I did on the ground was run to the nearest snack bar. The best scenary was while I was going down. You could just make out the Snack bars and forest surrounding it. It was like a sea of hands while going down the slope infront of me it was like waves breaking and forming in front of me. I also tasted the popcorn and hotdog oil in the air. The metal safety bar infront of me was a cold steel smooth touch. it was nothing like the bumpy hard plastic seat. And the air was cool on my face and then after the roller coaster I felt refreshed.

4 comments:
you are very interested in food even when you are free falling. hey thats just like me:)
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"Also the grinding wheels against the rail tracks and screaching to a halt at the end"
i like this sentence because it makes me feel like i am there and that i am hearing it as i am reading the sentence! Awesome sentence!
"It was like a sea of hands while going down the slope infront of me it was like waves breaking and forming in front of me."
i like this sentence alot because i can really imagine all the waves of hands in the air in the roller coaster! GREAT job!
how can you smell food when you are 50 feet in the air and going at 50 miles per second? and i wouldn't want to be on a roller coaster that screeches it doesn't sound very safe.
but you did create a visualization of what its like at a fair i have nevr been to one. ;p
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